The Green Door… First Draft, A Work in Progress, Day 2

 

Deep in thought, she didn’t notice the old man sitting quietly on a dirty stoop across the street, both showing their years. He watched the scene and smiled a half-smile, with a look of knowing in his eyes….

 

Notes to self:

  • synonym for dirty? possibly…
  • Is ‘both’ unclear, misplaced?

 

 

TGIF!

🙂

 

Author: RobinLK

Robin is a lifelong learner, seasoned educator, writer, artist, and US Navy veteran. She writes and creates to quiet her noisy mind while trying to figure out this crazy thing called life. Some days, it's clear... other days, not so much!

2 thoughts on “The Green Door… First Draft, A Work in Progress, Day 2”

  1. Yes the “both” is confusing. Don’t know if you see my thoughts because WP makes me sign in and then when I get back to your page whatever I wrote is gone…

  2. Thanks, Natine, for the writing feedback! Yes, I do see your comments and click Like/Reply or just Like at the moment, if reading at red lights or at work. 😊

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